Class Feedback
What went well
Good time lapse
A good range of running shots
Understandable narrative
Improvements to be made
More close ups on feminine features
express more of the female characteristics
Zooming shots to be cut
More close ups, tighter close ups
Take camera off of tripod for blueprint shot
Improve slanted beginning shot
Dark shoots to be reshot
Add sound - sound track, voice over, sound effects.
Shot 5 make Nicolette as the focus
Re shoot first shot
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